Sunshine Challenge: Iris

[renfys]

School For Average Children

End of Year Report

Name: Iris Whitehouse

Year: 8

Iris is one of the younger girls at our school, and still coming into her own. While she is one of the smaller girls, she is quite hardy and I am hopeful in time she will be quite strong, though I note she is much more active in the late spring and summer. During the winter and autumn terms, she is quieter and more reserved and would suit a warmer climate long term.

She has bursts of brilliance we are working to temper down, and seems to be favouring the sword. She is adept at fencing already after a single term with the sword, and should she put on more muscle over the next couple of years may be quite skilled larger swords. Her small frame puts into doubt her ability to wield a great sword, but we shall see as she grows what she is capable.

Iris has settled in well at the school, her sister has been a great help in that but I have seen her attempting to forge her own path often over the course of her first year.

Academically she is average, showing some promise in Maths. She is a pleasure to teach however, and while she may be quieter during the winter months, she is still learning and taking everything in.

Comments

[enemytosleep]

Oooo is this original fiction?

I love the sort of POV feel this academic report gives. It's not a strict character piece, and yet we get to learn quite a lot about small Iris and her journey at this school.